She lay there in my arms,
as still as a rock.
About to sail the sea,
where she could never dock.
She told me she had to leave,
She told me we had to part.
She told me it was not the end,
but was just another path.
She told me she was sick,
She told me she was done.
She told me not to stop,
and keep moving on.
With her cries still echoing,
She told me not to cry.
And with a glimpse of my tears,
She told me not to try.
She told me I should remember,
the happy days together.
The songs of our time
and our beautiful place's weather.
I did not utter a word,
I could not utter a word.
An epic on my lips,
it just could not be heard.
With eyes full of love,
She told me she is mine.
And the same watery eyes,
whispered it was time.
With a deep gasp of air,
she sunk into my arms.
The world had stopped,
grey, cold and devoid of all its charms.
She lay there in my arms,
as still as a rock.
Sailing the seas,
where she could never dock.
I know my love for her
would never stop,
For she was my own
dear-dearest laptop.
11 comments:
u know what Nihar, u almost took my breathe away..it is so emotional, touchy n mind blowing..i went back to my old days...n all of a sudden the turning point of the entire blog.., u were talking abt ur lappie not ur gf....
well i must nt step back in admiring the fact that this is awesome..i have never heard of such before..this is truly an innovation..keep up the good work n keep writing such stuffs moe often..i wud love go through all these....cheers...
well i still believe tht she is not laptop becoz according to me laptop would be "he" not "she" ..so how abt u tell us . who is "she" ?
Hmmmmmmm one word “Wow”
A piece of write is perfect when u keep the reader wondering “what is next” n what can be a better example than this. Laptop!! so well personified.:D (provided it is for the laptop ONLY). I feel like imagining my lappy with such thoughts (just that for me it has to be a "HE") :D
Brilliant :) NRD rocks!
BTW, who is your Laptop now-a-days?
;)
Naishe
@Tapi : Thanks a lot Tapi. Dont know abt innovation, but yes I really feel for my lappy. :)
@Pankuda : Dude, my laptop is dead, please dont make it my gf. :P
@Lips : LOL, i can already imagine you hugging your lappy as hell. That will surely kill it. :P
@Naishe : Shaalay!! No one yet, but I am expecting to get a new one soon. :P
So beautiful and the end was OMG! And considering that one literally eats, sleeps and stares at one's lappy for the major part of d day, I can understand your grief. May her HD/components RIP :)
It felt like I read this somewhere before.. Nice one dude !! Cheers !
wow nihar da
@Sonik : Indeed I am left all bereft. My dear had some circuitry issues. :(
@Bisu and Naba : Thanks mates!!
u...feel lyk hitting u, i was abt 2 cry man bt d end was really sumthng unexpected..kudos!! bro i luvd it..
i am in love with my lappy now !!!
tapan
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